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“The Thread That Bares All,” by Jocelyn Detar: March 2025 1st Place

Ren’s symbol had always been a thread. A single, thin line etched on his wrist, fragile and unimpressive. Others had symbols of strength—shields, fire, wings—marks that defined their power, their purpose.


But a thread? Threads frayed. Threads broke.


So Ren lived quietly, never expecting much. He watched others shape the world while he merely tried to hold himself together.


Then, one day, his symbol shifted.


The thread began to unravel, stretching across his skin, branching like roots, weaving into patterns he couldn’t understand. Panicked, he covered it, fearing what it meant—was he falling apart?


Desperate, he sought the Elders. They studied his changing mark and said, “You have always misunderstood your gift.”


Ren shook his head. “It’s just a thread. It can be cut, torn—useless.”


One Elder smiled. “No. A thread connects.”


They led him through the village, pointing at the people he had helped in quiet ways—the friend he had comforted, the stranger he had guided home, the child he had lifted when they fell.


“Do you see?” they whispered. “You are the unseen bond between others. You do not stand alone because you are the reason no one else has to.”


Ren’s breath caught.


All his life, he had envied the warriors, the healers, the ones who changed the world with their hands. He had never realized—he had been changing it all along.


His thread was no longer a single strand. It was woven into everyone he had ever touched, stretching beyond him, linking lives, binding hearts.


And for the first time, he saw his truth.


He was not weak.


He was the stitch in the fabric of the world.


And without him, it would all unravel.

 
 
 

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